an apology : a poem
A poem
I wish I could say sorry for all the times
I had watched you as the lightning fed on your soul and the sky spit you into the ocean
a hint of sadness that touched your tumultuous eyes as the waves dissolved you into dust
For all the times I had looked back, but never once caught the vulnerability veiled behind your imprisoned smiles, the predicament of not understanding the weight of your scars and the world around you, I wish I could take it all away
They say hurt hearts could not heal, but what better way than to soothe it with words
An apology lies on the tip of my tongue, but dies in my throat, for no words can take what your eyes conveyed, the pain of a torn heart that only remained.
I'm sorry.... for everything
~iniya
Hello Iniya I am broad07 from Miraquill. I had come here to comment. Actually In Miraquill I had not received my commenting rights as I am new so I comment using their suggested feedbacks. But the sad part is that through that I cannot comment 'Welcome' on your replies of 'Thank You'. Other days it was fine but today you replied so beautifully so I thought it would be bad that I cannot even give a welcome. So here I came to just say you that 'You are always welcome 😊'......Btw your poems and quotes are truly fantastic.....And yes coming to this blogspot I had the chance to read this Sorry poem of yours this is also a heartfelt poem. It made me emotional. Beautiful play of words. And I will surely read other poems of your blogspot.
ReplyDeleteHey broad07. I'm so glad to hear from you. I'm so ecstatic to know that you like my poems and writeups. Thankyou for your appreciation. It do means a lot to me and motivates me to write more. Thankyou for coming this far and checking out my blog and giving me an encouraging comment. I appreciate it, I really do. It's okay. I'll always know that you send your regards even you're not able to comment. Thankyou again, for everything. Keep up your motivational work❤️
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